"Adrenaline Forest"
I woke up on a Wednesday excited as can be ready for my time at Adrenaline Forest.
When I got to school my bestfriend Mailli was already there. But then the ball rang and Naquita wasn't there and me and Mailli were really sad because we thought she wasn't coming. Then a few minutes past and Nogo came in to check everyone was here so then me and Mailli were praying that Naquita would come to school and just as Nogo was leaving Naquita had finally arrived at school and Mailli and I were so excited to see her.
First break finished and it was time to gather the year 7 & 8's and do a roll to make sure everyone was here. After the roll it was time to leave.
We arrived our destination and the Adrenaline Forest was right next to Spencer Park. I was super excited to go on the course but I had to be forbearing because the instructor was explaining how to use the harness and I did not want to be stuck 5 metres above the ground. Before going on to level 1 we had to do a mini test. At first I struggled with my clippers but on level one I got the hang of it. I wasn't scared at all which I was quite shocked because i'm not a big fan of heights. I had completed level 1 and I thought it was quite easy so I moved straight to level 3 and on that level I had been just a bit more scared cause it was a bit higher. Then I had completed that level so I moved on to level 5b but there was a slight difficulty because the person I was behind was to slow so I did not have enough time to do the course and it sucked.
After that I had some food and then I took off my gear and we all got into the van ready to leave the park.
We arrived back at school and it was 3:00pm which meant it was home time so I got my sister and we got picked up by mum and went home... and that was my adventure at Adrenalin Forest.
After that I had some food and then I took off my gear and we all got into the van ready to leave the park.
We arrived back at school and it was 3:00pm which meant it was home time so I got my sister and we got picked up by mum and went home... and that was my adventure at Adrenalin Forest.
A good blog Kahukura, glad you enjoyed yourself. You need to describe in detail some of the senses(sight, sound, touch) in this case to describe your day. e.g. I'm not a big fan of heights(personal voice) coming through which sounds exactly like you. Next time could you add in a few similies and metaphors to fully describe some events and the day. e.g. 'my heart skipped a beat when Naquita hadn't turned up to school.'
ReplyDeleteThank you Nogo i will make sure i will do that next time thanks for you feedback.
DeleteHi Kahu,
ReplyDeleteWe did have a wonderful day at Adrenaline Forest, didn't we? It was so good watching you all challenge yourselves on the obstacles which were so high off the ground. I too am scared of heights, but would not have the courage to conquer my fear and have a go, like the rest of you did.
I really enjoyed reading your blog and you did very well at making the reader feel your concern that Naquita arrived at school late. I was definitely interested to read more! Just remember to check your post before you publish. Sometimes the computer will auto-fix some of your word choices and they may not fit so well, for what you are trying to say. Getting a friend or kaiako to check before you publish, is one way to try to avoid this.
Nga mihi, Whaea Willie
Nga mihi Whaea Willie will make sure to that next time.
DeletePai ki te panui to haerenga ki Te ngahere o Adrenalin. Ahakoa te poturi haere o tetahi tama he ra miharo.
ReplyDeleteTena raua atu koe (thank you).
DeleteHi that looks so fun wish I could be
ReplyDeletethere. keep the good work up